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Kathy Kramer posted an update in the group
Horror Workshop 9 months, 4 weeks agoI have a short story I’d like to workshop. I’m not sure if it’s really horror as much as it might be suspense. Let me know your opinions and what you think needs to be done.
https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B-5fmOYZLYcSRkJmRVpZNXloZDQ
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Well like you said a good intro that sets the mood would help the story a bit
But overall i enjoyed reading it, and for some reason i chuckled at the rnd, probally
Not what your going for. An idea i thought might work is shes goin through the messages
And theres one from the mom say “you cant run from me forever, ill find you!”
Maybe like the…[Read more]